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Here's the beginning of the story I'd like you to write together. I want to remind you that this activity is COMPULSORY as any others you do in class and I expect you ALL to contribute. Post your contribution as a comment, following any previous posts. Make sure your part makes sense in relation to what people have written before!

His thoughts were like a shower of red-hot glowing needles in his head, an almost unbearable pain. He did his utmost to remain calm, to think clearly. The worst thing was fear. The fear that Jim would unleash his dogs and hunt him down, like the terrified beast of prey he had become. All through that long night of November 18, when he had run until he was exhausted and had hidden among the decomposing roots of a fallen tree, he imagined that he could hear them closing in.